
As the release date for The Fall of Dorkhun approaches, I want to give credit and praise to my close friend, Philip Hopkins, who edited the manuscript. ย There are many passages and phrases and scenes in the book that are good because of the diligent work he did combing through my mess. ย I have long maintained that Philip is one of the smartest people I know, and as I read through his comments, suggestions, and markings on the book, my opinion of his abilities only grew.
If any of my writer friends are looking for a good editor, someone who can pour through your work and polish the language into something tight and well-crafted, I highly recommend Philip. ย He is a natural and has an innate sense for the rhythm of language and the flow of narrative. ย He is thorough and consistent and honest, so if you have a tender ego that’s easily bruised, he might not be the right editor for you. ย But if you are a serious professional who wants to improve the quality of your work, you should hire him to work on your manuscript.
In terms of pricing, I can only say that he is fair and reasonable. ย That said, he did give me a “friend” price, so if he charges you less, please don’t tell me. ย In all seriousness, though, his services are worth every penny. ย If you’re interested, please let me know, and I’ll forward him your email address.