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Author Interview Ramblings

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For today’s installment of the Worlds of Wonder blog hop, yours truly answers a few questions about writing:

Can you tell us a little about your first publishing experience?

Back in 1995, I had been shopping short stories for about a year.  I was in my final year as an undergraduate and had written fifteen or so stories that I felt were pretty good.  Looking back, I realize they were probably immature and ridiculous, but at the time, I believed all of them were great.  At that point, I was trying to write mainstream “literary” fiction because that’s what was drilled into our heads in the program.  After 36 rejections, most of them form letters with no feedback, I got a call from a guy I knew who was the editor at a small literary magazine at UAB.  He loved my story, “You Can Never Tell Anything” and wanted to publish it.  The story appeared in their Spring edition and my pay was two contributor’s copies.

A few months later, he called me up and said an agent had contacted him and wanted my number.  I thought he was messing with me, but sure enough, a week later, I got a call from a fairly well-respected agent in New York, a guy who had a pretty solid stable of writers.  He loved the story, too, thought I had a lot of potential, and wanted to know if I had anything novel length.  I was elated and just knew this was my big break, so I sent him the first three chapters of the novel I was finishing.  A couple of weeks after I sent it to him, he returned it with a polite note saying he didn’t think it was publishable.  Needless to say, I was crestfallen.  For a couple of months, I moped around and felt sorry for myself.  Then, one day, I decided that I needed to sharpen my skills, so I went back to work and focused on honing my skills.

Looking back today, that rejection from that agent was one of the best things that could’ve happened to me.  It forced me to put my ego in check and learn my craft.  I was young, naive  and immature.  If that book had been published, it would’ve been the end of my career, regardless of how successful it became because I wouldn’t have grown as much as I did.  Also, in those days, I was fairly self-destructive, and if I’d gained even a measure of success from that work, I would’ve lost myself in a sea of alcohol and been done for.  Instead, I got an opportunity to learn, grow, and mature not just as a writer but also as a person.

Which came first for you, the characters or the plot?

For me, everything follows from the characters.  Whatever I’m working on, I have to know at least the protagonist before anything else.  From there, the plot, back story, descriptions, and anything else in the story grow out of the characters’ realities.  To that end, I spend a lot of time thinking about the characters before writing the first word.  Whenever I have idle time, I immerse myself into their lives and think about who they are, where they come from, what has shaped and scarred them.  I’ve found that the more I do this, the easier the story will unveil itself during the writing.  Regardless of how much time I spend thinking about them, however, they always find a way to surprise me once the story gets going, and that to me, is one of the best aspects of writing, that act of discovery.  It’s what motivates me to come back to the keyboard night after night.

Do you think you may ever go into another genre?

My next project will be much different.  I’m prewriting a near future, urban fantasy, trans-human novel about a mechanically/digitally enhanced soldier.  Right now, it’s in the early planning stages, but so far, I really love the protagonist.

What are some of the pro’s and con’s of self-publishing verses being published by a publisher in your opinion?

First, I must say that I’m a big fan of self-publishing because that’s how I re-launched my career.  Today, I’m with Seventh Star Press, but at first I was on my own.  In this era, we don’t need New York because we have the internet and much better distribution and inventory control through POD printers like Lightning Source.  The advantages to it are complete creative control over the process and the opportunity to get your name out there without several years of waiting on the old houses to make decisions.

That said, I know firsthand how difficult it can be.  First and foremost, do your research before you even think about it.  Understand your production costs, especially if you’re going to have paperback copies.  Even if you’re just doing an ebook, I highly recommend hiring a professional artist for the cover and using a professional to layout the text.  I cut corners on my original cover, and it set me back quite a bit.  Also, you have to understand that there will be a stigma associated with self-publishing.  If you can’t accept that stigma and deal with it as a professional, don’t self-publish.  Also and most importantly, don’t be so arrogant as to think you don’t need an editor.  Grammar matters.  Punctuation matters.  Spelling for damn sure matters.  Pay someone to clean up your manuscript BEFORE it goes to print.  This is your name and credibility on the line, and right now, way too many people are putting rough drafts on the market.  If you want longevity in this industry, have a little pride in the book you’re producing and don’t show it to the world until it’s ready.  Otherwise, you’re killing your career before it begins.  The main reason I survived as a self-published author was because the content of The Brotherhood of Dwarves was of professional quality, even though the cover and printing were shoddy.  People respected the book because it was well-written, and the reason it was well-written was because an editor polished it with me.  I can’t stress rewriting enough.

What is your favorite part of writing?

The readers.  Talking to them, listening to their feedback, discussing characters with them, that’s the best part.  I love the act of writing, too, but talking to my audience is what keeps me going.  I love how passionate they can be about the books.  I love when they ask me about particular details or want to know more about this character or that back story.  I love to receive emails or comments on the blog.  No matter how many times it happens, it’s always exciting.  I consider myself fortunate to have such an awesome audience, and I am grateful to each and every individual who has taken the time to read my work.  Even the ones who don’t like my style are appreciated because they often give me feedback that can make me better as a writer.  To all of my readers, I just want to say, “Thank you.”

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Book Excerpt Ramblings

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As part of the Worlds of Wonder blog hop, today’s post is an excerpt from the soon to be released fourth book of The Brotherhood of Dwarves series
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From Chapter 3

The Life that Should Have Been

In the faint light of dawn, Crushaw squatted and drew a crude map in the dirt near the gate to Kwarck’s farm, outlining the western mountains, the Mother of Ice, and the plains. Then, he marked where he wanted the ogres to set their defenses, several miles south of their border within the lands of Rugraknere. From traveling those lands with Roskin, he remembered an expansive field north of the last town they had stopped in that would serve perfectly. Across from him, Vishghu and Kwarck quietly watched, each staring intently at his scheme.

“The Great Empire is here already,” he said, indicating the majority of Rugraknere. “So they’ll want to march north, clip the ogres’ western flank, and then turn against the Kiredurks. You must convince enough matriarchs to hold them here.” He dug the stick deeper into the dirt.

“I know that area well,” Vishghu returned. “I’ll convince my mother, and she holds sway with many others.”

“Good. I’ll approach from here,” he said, drawing an arrow from the east. “General Strauteefe is in command. He’ll want to wait for the spring thaw before advancing, but if you press forward in winter, he’ll be forced to meet you. I’ll arrive on the Winter Solstice.”

“Does that give us time to train the army?” Kwarck asked, uncertainty tingeing his voice.

“No, but it gives us the advantage of bad weather.”

“I don’t know,” Kwarck said. “Extra time would be a better benefit.”

“I agree with that,” Vishghu said. “My people could use the time to build better fortifications.”

Crushaw dropped his stick and rose to full height. Despite his age, his presence became commanding and imposing. Clenching his jaw, he stared at them for several heartbeats, and their expressions changed from questioning to submissive. He exhaled sharply and pointed his right index finger first at Kwarck and then at Vishghu:

“Do you know why I’ve never lost a pitched battle?”

“I don’t doubt your judgment,” Kwarck said, lowering his eyes.

“You’ve charged me with leading this army,” Crushaw snarled. “So do me the courtesy of answering me.”

“No, I don’t.”

“Because I always choose the time and place,” he said, his voice a low growl. Shifting his attention to Vishghu, he continued, “Control those and you dictate the kind of battle fought. Strauteefe is cautious. He’s planning a siege up a mountain in the spring and summer. Do either of you know what that means?”

Both shook their heads. Behind them at the gate, Vishghu’s buffalo stamped its front hoof, the sound startling in the quiet of morning.

“He won’t have many long bows. Mostly crossbows for close range. And catapults and trebuchets. And infantry, heavily armored.”

Vishghu nodded, a look of comprehension coming over her.

“One thing the elves already know how to do is fire long bows accurately. That’s about our only advantage, and in heavy snow, I like long bows against armored infantry. I like knowing that catapults and trebuchets will be hard to maneuver. And I really like hitting my enemy before they want me to.”

“You’re right, Crushaw,” Kwarck said. “I’m sorry.”

“If you want me to lead, we do things my way.”

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Character Interview Ramblings, Too

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As part of the Worlds of Wonder blog hop, today’s post is a second character interview, this time with Molgheon.

Alicia from Texas wants to know – “I am practicing using the long bow myself, haven’t hit the target yet though. Any pointers for beginner archers?”

As a young dwarf, I learned to shoot from my grandmother.  We had already been fending off the Great Empire for a few years, and she felt it was important for me to be able to defend myself and my home.  At first, I couldn’t even draw back the string, and it was months before I could even get near a target, but she was a steadfast and patient teacher.  She took me out every morning before breakfast and every evening after supper to practice.  In time, I developed a decent aim, so my best advice is to keep practicing until you know how your bow is going to react.  Also, see your arrow striking its target before you let go.  See it and know it.

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“What would be your most important lessons that you could teach to the world and younger generations?”

Be self-sufficient.  Don’t wait for anyone else to do something for you because you are your own champion, and you are your best champion.  Whether you are fighting in a war or running a tavern, you are the only one you can truly count on to have your best interests at heart, so don’t wait passively for something to happen.  Take action.  Be a leader.

“Do you ‘like’ Leinjar?”

If you mean do I respect him, yes.  He’s a great leader, much like Red.  He’s endured so much pain and suffering but is still at his core a noble dwarf.  I would march into battle beside him anywhere at any time because I trust his instincts.  He’s good with a blade, too.  If you mean do I like him romantically, then I have to say I don’t know.  It’s been so many years since I allowed myself to feel those kinds of feelings, I probably wouldn’t even recognize them.  Also, my heart will always belong to Carloghone.  But I will say this, if peace is ever restored to our lands and Leinjar becomes a family man again, he will make some dwarf very lucky.

“Do you hate all humans (except Red of course)?”

Not all.  There are some who have decency in their hearts, but I do hate most, and they have earned that hate through their greed and cruelty.  Other than Red, there are few humans I will ever trust.

Carolyn from Georgia asks – “Do you think if you had met Roskin in another time and place perhaps your relationship with him would have been different? And how so?”

He’s lucky he met me old and tired, otherwise I’d have left him somewhere as carrion.  That dwarf could drive anyone crazy with his arrogance and foolishness.  But he’s learning, I guess.  In a way, he reminds me a little of Carloghone.  That fool thought he could do anything, too, and usually he could pull it off.  One time, before we were married, he learned my unit had stopped in a particular town to rest and resupply for a few days.  He snuck away from his platoon, walked three hours to the town to see me for thirty minutes, and then walked three hours back.  About the time he got back to camp, his regiment went into battle.  Somehow, he lived to tell about it, so of course, I had to marry him.

But you asked about Roskin, and I’ll say about him what I said about Leinjar.  One day he’ll make someone lucky, if he grows up a little more and learns to listen better.  He has a good heart and is such a handsome dwarf, with that Loorish colored beard and those dark eyes.  He’s also the most skilled warrior I’ve ever known, but don’t tell him I said that.  His ego is already big enough as it is.

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This character interview originally appeared on Bab’s Book Bistro, May 9, 2012.